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Hi ye jin, just now you put four people when there was only three lily
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every body PLEASE LOOK HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! any further news about the powerpoit? Before you redo the powerpoint, i would like to tell you that i want to add a slide about why and how trees are important to us. or else if you don't have it, you ca't say "they die we die" because why will they die if we die? we know it but new people might not know it. and i want to take out one slide: i want to take out the before and after slide because it is the same thing as one of the many slides. and there is no speach to say about it.Hurry up check out lily

Hi again guys!!!!! Everybody follow the instructions every body has to do this. 1. Go to this island page.( click on this) 2.scroll down to where you see a powerpoint. 3. click on the powerpoint and look ant it. 4. read the passage by lily below. Don't you think that we should put facts and words on the powerpoint? and we only have 5 or 6 slides. Berry do you want to redo the powerpoint because i really want to change it. with me?you can get the facts from ye jin for the fact but if you don't want to you don't have to. it doesn't matter p.s. i do not want our group to be like tiffany's what i;m trying to say is that mabe we can put facts on the slides. But that is your choice since you are doing the slides. If you want to, Ye jin is the fact person. I'm sorry if you think that i was expecting too much in the powerpoint. lily

cool cat must have took you a long time. lily

Hey guys, i posted my powerpoint in Climate-Catherine. If you have time, you can go see it. It's about the climate of our island.

~Catherine~

Berry, I didn't see the map anywhere on wikispace!!! Can you repost it so i can use it for my powerpoint?

~Catherine~ Hey guys click on "Berry" on the side under navigation. I will put the final copy of my map there. okay?? Tell me if you guyslike it after I finish.

~Berry~

I think it's great...my person was a princess who hated her life as royalty so she runs away. then she goes through a realy rough time and some how finds herself up on Star Island.she was also born in europe.
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~Ankh

hi ye jin, i love it don't change anything lily

Hey Lily, now I remember what the H.E was. Yeah I think that should be the history. Kyoko, does it match with the history you have for Ms. Starbucks? Guys, please read my 'New Script' and tell me about it. We're already rehearsing and I need to fix it as soon as I can. If you don't like it, just tell me the part you don't like. Ye Jin

every body PLEASE LOOK HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! any further news about the powerpoit? Before you redo the powerpoint, i would like to tell you that i want to add a slide about why and how trees are important to us. or else if you don't have it, you ca't say "they die we die" because why will they die if we die? we know it but new people might not know it. and i want to take out one slide: i want to take out the before and after slide because it is the same thing as one of the many slides. and there is no speach to say about it.Hurry up check out the time line. ( i am suppose to wright about one thing and me and ye jin decided on the H.E. so this is the over view): The H.E. was caused by many different reasons but the main reason if for the gold that was found during 1818-1819. Cause:fight for ownage of land and fight for gold. Effect:who gets land and every body wants gold. Conclusion: Several reasons constribute to the war of H.E. but the main reason was for gold. Make sure to check my time line in the disscusion board!!!!! tell me if you like it It is due this fri!!!!!!! lily

Hi again, this is my very first rough draft:

Hawaii had many islands that they did not care about. In 1807, one of Hawaii’s tallest volcanoes” volcano Hala had erupted. Hawaii thought that they had lost their island that uses to be called: Hallay. Soon, Ms. Starbucks found this island and renamed it. It was called, Estralla bucks!! During 1818-1819, people started to find gold because of the volcano eruption. The Hawaii heard about it so they came and fought with the Estralla buckins and that’s when the H.E. took place. (The Hawaii and Estralla war). They were fighting for two simple reasons: Hawaii thought that it was their island but Ms. Starbuck, the English and the Spanish claimed it their land. The other reason was that there was gold found in that island so Hawaii wanted to fight. So they fought, they fought on sea for three whole years; Estralla finally won and got their independence. give me feed back thanks!!!! lily

AWSOME!!!!! I think it's great!!! 2 thumbs up...My person is going to be found on gooooooold bucks during the serch for sure!!! But what are those lines coming out of the edges???

~Vappaille

Hey here is one of the three maps.(I'm not finished)

Hi everybody, This is my facts i wrote for Estrellabucks. Nearby countries: California and Hawaii What size is your island: 2/3 of Hawaii Phisical geography: we have mountains, waterfalls, river, and lake. The tallest mountain is called Mt. Buckstar. Water fall is Strella Fall. Climate there: Part of it is tropical wer, and tropical wet and dry. Tropical savanna. Temp. The hottest can be 81 F The coldest is 73 F

~Catherine

well hi berry. you only made six slides.kyokos doing 1st and last and so there are only 4 slides left who is going to do what? please add in another slide as fast as you can. And can you do 'look at them !!! they are sad!!!!!! and tell me what to wright!! lily

hi berry the powerpoint was good but you need to say who is doing what on the last page. lily

Hi everybody, Berry and i have made the powerpoint, and this is the first draft of it. If you want to add or make changes to it, you can tell berry or i and we can add or change it for you if everyone agrees to. Here is the powerpoint: [|Deforestation powerpoint2.ppt] ~Catherine

hi guys i think that that was a better name do you agre kyoko? lily

Okay Kyoko, but how did she get her Starbucks name? Put the word 'bucks' in the name Carrie Star White for example= Carrie White Starbucks. Starbucks as last name. Carrie White as first name. What do you think? Ye Jin

hi gys read the bottom lin. kyoko left a message. do you agree with her? lly

hi ye jin!!!!!!!! i love your story exept that i don't know about catherine berry and kyoko. lily

Hey Lily, I'll try to get a song that mentions stars and money. Okay, I'll make the music quiet. But I'm not sure if I can have music in it. I'll ask Mr. Edwards about that. Guys, do you like the new story? If you do, I'll just stick to it. Ye Jin

hi guys it's me lily. cat! you did such a great job on the navagation. and berry, i don't think you should put music because if we have music and a speach at the same time, that won't be good and je jin you can put music but you might want to pick some thing that mentions "bucks' my sugestion would be to sing it by yourself with your friend i thought you loved singing (btw: this is only a sugestion you don't have to do it).um and berry, did you see the other groupes? there main page is totally full but they only have 10 discusions and we have 110!!!!!!!!!!! so just keep adding it on. ye jin, if you want to add music, dont make it loud because every body has to talk. lily

Hey guys, I'm done with the script. Tell me about the part you don't get. And, should I put background music? Which song would be for our play? Is it okay if I say Ms. Starbucks is half English half Spanish? Ye Jin

That quite a good idea, but there is one problem. If we keep editing this page, soon it will be full. So I think that every now and then someone should ask for everybodies permission and delete everything and start over. Anyways I'm almost done with the power point for science. DO you think I should put music?? Tell me if you want me to. ~Berry~

How do you guys like how I orginized the navigation? If you guys dont like it, i can change it back.

~Cat

Hi guys, so let's get started now, shall we? So what's everybody been doing in their sessions? I'm doing the timeline. By the way, I put the tas main page in the navigation bar so we can get it easily. -Lily PS. Check out this island page.

ok!

~kyoko

you guys lets just click on "edit this page" to talk. ok? it makes it so much easier for me! THX!!!!! editing on this page.

hey guys this is lily i agree with kyoko. we already have about 100 discussins no kidding. so start editing on this page. lily

YAY! you agree! so my persons name is carrie star white but as a celeb they call her ms.starbucks! ~Kyoko

SRY everybody for not being on latley, but it was my enternet conection!!!!!!!

~Kyoko please kyoko right on the top.. lily